I really like this poem, its really deep! 5 out of 5! good job comment and vote on mine if u have a chance.

Very good poem. . .i don't know whether you wrote this about yourself or just out of the blue but either way i believe it. . .even if it hasn't happened to you, it's happened to someone out there.
comment on mine :D
~*~Amber~*~(lifetimecowgirl)

This poem was superior to anything i've ever read.....this was amazing, i loved it!

Really good poem it really hit close to home for me i really love it keep writing

Wow reli strikin poem i love it 5/5 lv rachel xxx

That was relly good can u read and rate some of my poems thanks bye

AWESOME. i love it... rate on mine please!

Wow hun, I really loved this poem. Your described so well what you were feeling and put so much emotion and soul into you poem. It's definately something I can relate to. I have tried to kill myself eight times, and I have been a cutter for about a year. My heart goes out to you hunny, please hold on.

-Mikochan

Wow its so real and powerfull...
i know exactly what this poem is getting at

well done

xoxo

That was amazing!! You're going onto my favourites list, definitely!

A few things that I picked out while reading the poem that could be changed...

"watch as i was hit and abused
screwed over, wasted and used
throw around punched and confused
too bad at that time no one new
all the things i was going threw"

here "threw" should be "through"

"as your watching...
count all the slits
how many times have i cut my wrist
hot many nights did i get a razor blade kiss?
sad, theres a movie out like this."

theres = there's

"I dream of suicide"
did you notice I'm dead inside
I've been emptied out and lost all my pride
behind my eyes I'm forced to lie
i get no funeral and yet i dyed.

^^ I get no funeral and yet I've died

If you watched closely
You'd notice theres a missing scene
I'm surely not okay
Now My life's stuck on suicide replay

^^ there's

Great write overall!!! Amazing job with writing emotion into your poem.. Powerful and a perfect portrayal of the events inside the poem!