by Donna Oct 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I am a painter in my mind |
I quite liked this poem. the beginning started VERY well and in a strong manner, with great use of metaphors, but I feel the final and obvious mention of crimson dripping down was somewhat cliché and brought the poem down a bit, But not to worry cause the rest of it is, in itself...a masterpiece ;) |
I quite liked this poem. the beginning started VERY well and in a strong manner, with great use of metaphors, but I feel the final and obvious mention of crimson dripping down was somewhat cliché and brought the poem down a bit, But not to worry cause the rest of it is, in itself...a masterpiece ;) |
by Jamie
Awesome like the metaphor you used good job.... |