Contradiction Feelings

by CE   Oct 11, 2005


Rose's are red, violets are blue I'm thinking of the reason why I hate you,

You make me feel weak when I try to be strong,You have me sitting up at night wondering why we don't get along,

Just the thought of your voice irritates me so,Regretting the day that i once called you a ho*,

My friends can't understand why I hate you so much maybe its because I'm scared to admit I secretly love your crazy butt,

I write poems and say they aren't about you, but its obvious they are just as the sky is blue,

As the seasons past since last we spoke, i realize my feelings are true, but I can't write another poem for you,

So saver this poem cause it will be the end the next time you see affection from me is Armageddon,

Guess what though this poem isn't real, it's a poem to lore you in and then I'll trap you and go for the kill,

I'm soulless I'm heartless I'm everything you think, if you were the Titanic I'd purposely let you sink,

You think you hurt me when you don't speak but its humorous to me cause you ain't the one i seek,

I want you dead with everything in my bone, for real don't hate me for this but I just want you gone

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    This goes wrong in the same place again, line spacing, I'm sorry but I think it bothers some other people too, not just me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Very very clear... I wonder who this was for?? anyways, I liked this poem a lot, after thinking of it yesterday I came back to read again.
    I take my time with commenting, cause I don't want to hurt anyone.
    But with this poem, there isn't a critic I can give it's brilliant :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Great poem. Wasn't expecting that ending but it was really good. i luved the lines
    "I'm soulless I'm heartless I'm everything you think, if you were the Titanic I'd purposely let you sink"

    Amazing! keep up the awesome work! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    People are going to wonder whi i put so many comments on this one, but ne way i knew it wasnt him... the words just made it feel so real. thanx for the comments tho! i look for more from you later!

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Hey i stole a line from you hope ya dont mind .... it was too good. what to say, your poems suck me in so much and make me believe you are cold hearted. truly good poets do that.

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