That was hot how you Switched it up at the end.. that was hot.. Keep up the good work.. I'm really feeling that. even doe it was about my sister!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for commenting on one of my poems... this is returning the favor. ;) I like this poem. It's very creative! 5/5

Absolutely amazing. i love it!

... ... ... ... maybe im dreaming... ... ...
maybe this i real, maybe this is the way that you feel, maybe it was a waist, maybe i really do have bad taste, maybe your the one hurting, just trying tobe strong and cover it up.... ... ...

funny how much this is what he`d say.

Hey i stole a line from you hope ya dont mind .... it was too good. what to say, your poems suck me in so much and make me believe you are cold hearted. truly good poets do that.

People are going to wonder whi i put so many comments on this one, but ne way i knew it wasnt him... the words just made it feel so real. thanx for the comments tho! i look for more from you later!

Great poem. Wasn't expecting that ending but it was really good. i luved the lines
"I'm soulless I'm heartless I'm everything you think, if you were the Titanic I'd purposely let you sink"

Amazing! keep up the awesome work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Chica~

Very very clear... I wonder who this was for?? anyways, I liked this poem a lot, after thinking of it yesterday I came back to read again.
I take my time with commenting, cause I don't want to hurt anyone.
But with this poem, there isn't a critic I can give it's brilliant :D

This goes wrong in the same place again, line spacing, I'm sorry but I think it bothers some other people too, not just me.