Great Poem! Makes me think...

Hey.... I am dEfinItely glad u are back... your poems are amazing.. especially for only being 13.. i mean your so poetic.. i love this poem.... it flows beautifully, and stays consistent to the point! i love it.. please comment on my poems too if u got time.... especially "Reckless Emotion".. i look forward to hearing more poems from you.. let me know when u get some more up!

Clear written poem, nice job. One thing though, try not to repeat "I" too much

Wow amazin poem love the flow and the strangth you showed in it wish i could be that strong. 5.5

You have a wonderful skill for ending lines, such power in a subtle sentence. Very well done indeed.

By burning ur desires and ur feelings away it'll be the next step to moving on from forgetting him... but it doesnt mean u hav relinquished all your feelings but its always a try so fight your feelings and you'll have me and all ur other friends there for u step by step

This is so beautiful, I love the last stanza. Keep writing. 5/5

Outstanding work. I loved that poem.