Hey hearty ... that's a very nice one !
but why do you always end it with death ?? i mean it always starts very nice and innocent ... it's very shocking when you mention blood at the end !
but anyways i think that's your style , and real poets would like it .. i'm just a bit optimistic ... keep it up hun !!

Omg, I thought that was amazing. 5/5. And if you ever think about suicide, DON"T DO IT. If someone makes you want to do something like that, they are SO not worth it! keep your head up! :)

This is really good. Thanx for your comment, and I will read all ur poems if they are all this good. Keep up the good work!!!

Shattered Tears