by wanted dead or alive! Oct 11, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I dont want to talk about it, |
by Nikki
This poem is great and I like how the reader can come up with their own ideas as to why the characters feels like 'life is so unfair.' In my head, the poem is telling the story of a girl who has been cheated on by her first love. I could be completely wrong but it's good how the story is ambiguous and focused on the emotion. |
by .
OOoOoOo this is really good!! i like it! 5/5 keep it up! |
Thankyou to everyone who has commented on my poem it means a LOT to me |
by Ashley
Great poem! know exact;ey what you mean.. 5/5 Check out some of mine, I would like to know what you think. xx |
by sophia
Ooo love you poem really deep :) |