Ooo i like ..its heaps gud this is the way i feel rite now :( lol ....luv roxy

Hey Trixie! As Kelly said, your poem is great, every word is what's going through my head right now, no-one understands what we're going through (arpart from us lot lol) and they can't help, so they should just stop asking us what's wrong and telling us to cheer up - it's not as easy as that!! Take care, love Shnivel xx

Ooo love you poem really deep :)

Great poem! know exact;ey what you mean.. 5/5 Check out some of mine, I would like to know what you think. xx

Thankyou to everyone who has commented on my poem it means a LOT to me
trixie xxx

OOoOoOo this is really good!! i like it! 5/5 keep it up!
Becky
xoxo

This poem is great and I like how the reader can come up with their own ideas as to why the characters feels like 'life is so unfair.' In my head, the poem is telling the story of a girl who has been cheated on by her first love. I could be completely wrong but it's good how the story is ambiguous and focused on the emotion.