October comes

by JodiieBaybeh   Oct 11, 2005


October comes
with a terrible day
the day that god snapped
and took you away
*
you were so full of life
and great to be around
so it hurt us to have to
throw your ashes to the ground
*
make no mistake about it
you've had your problems in the past
but you was getting back on your feet
and your death was the terriblest of blasts
*
Linda you'll never know
to us you were great,
and I'm sorry i couldn't say goodbye
because i was just too late...
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  • 17 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    So sorry, I know how it feels...i had a friend die in a car crash...if you need someone to talk to i'm always here..

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Im sorry for your loss ..beautiful writing x

  • 17 years ago

    by kolorful

    Hey great poem, sorry about your loss...thanks for commenting on my poem keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    Hey, im sorry about this again - i remember you telling me... great poem tho. lots of love xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    It was a great poem. an exelcent peice of work. sorry about your loss and i hope you feal better!!!

    ~ sleepless dreamer

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