Oooo thats good. :)

The way you wright this is truely amazing. i think the peom would have been okay without that last bit at the end, but even so, it's really good. a bit hard to understand... its about life rite?new life always being born? i had to read it twise to get that! well done whoever you are!

To be honest, it's not particularly about ANYTHING, but i supose you could channel it into rebirth in a way....

Original. I don't quite understand it, I like how you set the stanzas out in the this one, it's kinda experimental but it works well.

Brilliant! 5/5