by katie! Oct 11, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Looming over each of our heads, a cloud |
by x Saiya
Aww, Katie, that was beautiful. I am so sorry about your grandmother, and although no one in my family (that I've ever known) has died, I know the feeling of loosing someone. My poem 'Cancer' talks about that. That was beautifully and emotionally written, just amazing. 5/5 Great Job |
by Tiny Reader
The first and last stanzas are both beautiful! Actually the whole poem is but they were by far the best. This is honestly the best poem I've read in a long time. It's so sad. Amazing. Nearly made me cry |
by Lost Girl
That was amazing as usual, its so nice of you to care for her that much. Your words are really something special and you can express your feelings so well...stay strong |
Oh, i'm sorry about your gran. My grandpa-in-law is dying next door, and very slowly. anyway, the poem was so descriptive and intense, I actually got tense when I read it, seriously! I could feel someone elses heart beating, too, however weird that sounds. Great job, 5/5 |
by Bill Turner
Katie, you are a brilliant writer, able to capture emotion and transfer it to paper with ease! Great job! |