Awww Katie, how sad........ I'm sorry, I don't know what to say, but yes, she will be at peace and waiting for the time when she will see your beautiful face once more........ very heartfelt, emotional and beautifully written.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Aww sorry that this event is coming.

"She has held on but for how much longer?
If only we could make her stronger"

your love and encouragement probably has made her stronger! great lines though

touching poem, it's just so sad.

~Jacklyn

Beautifully conveyed! Your words are so soothing, leaving a calm mood to the entire piece! Well done~Holly

WOWOWOW Katie, you are awesome girl! I love your poetry. Mine is so sh..ty compared to yours. I am soooo sorry about your granny nd I hope everythin will go fine, you are a great girl and a poetess of the best quality. With the way you write I hope you the very best. The poem is very nostalgic and sad all way thrugh, it made me think if I have lived a good life after all. Maybe not. Thanks for sahring. Good job!

Katie, you are a brilliant writer, able to capture emotion and transfer it to paper with ease! Great job!

Oh, i'm sorry about your gran. My grandpa-in-law is dying next door, and very slowly. anyway, the poem was so descriptive and intense, I actually got tense when I read it, seriously! I could feel someone elses heart beating, too, however weird that sounds. Great job, 5/5

That was amazing as usual, its so nice of you to care for her that much. Your words are really something special and you can express your feelings so well...stay strong
xxx

The first and last stanzas are both beautiful! Actually the whole poem is but they were by far the best. This is honestly the best poem I've read in a long time. It's so sad. Amazing. Nearly made me cry

Aww, Katie, that was beautiful. I am so sorry about your grandmother, and although no one in my family (that I've ever known) has died, I know the feeling of loosing someone. My poem 'Cancer' talks about that. That was beautifully and emotionally written, just amazing. 5/5 Great Job

Saiya