Bleeding

by Bluey!   Oct 11, 2005


Tears, slowly rolling down my cheeks.
Wondering, why my heart still beats.
Brutaly you were taken from me.
They say that death sets you free.
Then why do I feel trapped within me.
Just hoping that someone will see.
That broken bleeding shell, thats me.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bluey!

    Wow it was years since I posted these and I just remembered doing so. And now someone comments. Thank you Shanik, I appreciate it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was such a good poem. It's so short but it cotains alot of emotions and meaning. I love your diction..very strong. Keep it up. Shanik

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was short but really sad and emotional, you're words are amazing, keep writing
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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    I thought you did a good job on this poem. I can relate really well to it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This is a great example of a 'thought theme' poem. Just writing down thoughts and questions that come along to you. It was good. But I suggest you change rolls to roll in this line:

    Tears, slowly rolls down my cheeks.

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