Comments : Nightmare

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Very well done i think this is also my favorite piece that you have writen! it's weird because you post this today and in the club the topic of the week is daydreaming. well done poem! right now i see nothing to complain about it! your really learning fast!

    ~Jacklyn

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That was good. The ending was cool and well the better part. Still it seems you're getting better.
    ~Disturbed Unknown

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Great writing!