I like the reference to Romeo and Juliet. Very few people know how to write with good shaperian style you achieved it pretty well. Good poem

Holy mother of god. This poem Rocks!

Happy Halloween!

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WHOA!!!!!!!!
That was great!
It was written in such a different, Shakespearian way. So original, I loved it. You have lots of talent. Keep writing, please! Thanks for the comment too. FUll points.

You have a great use of words that is what i love about your poems you are a true poet no doubt about it excellent job

That a really great poem .if you want would you read my poems.