by LadyPearl Oct 11, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Why do I write such poems of me |
by Jason Meres
Could use a little work on rhyme scheme, but I love the idea. Specifically in the first stanza, last two lines, then just the simple stuff like "Lend" and "Hand." A little polish and I would imagine this to be a very high level piece. |