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by Anthony Oct 11, 2005 category : Love, romance / new love
Show me that you need me, Show me that you care. Show me that the feelings That we have will still be there. Listen to the words I say, Listen to my heart. Listen as the world outside Tears my soul apart. Be the one who loves me, The one whom I adore. Be the one who\'s always there To help me off the floor. If you don\'t know how, Then theres always time to learn. Do all this for me, And I\'ll do it in return.
by Atomic
This poem was very good M'Dear. All except: "Show me the at the feelings That we have will still be there." This just threw off a nice flow. Try something like: "Show me that all the feelings, We had, will always remain there." Something like that. =) ( )_( ) (='.'=) (")-(") Arrivederci!