Comments : Who?

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Whoa, when you said you were gonna wite a free form poem, I didn't expect much. But \\//\\// (()) \\/\\//!

    You just love to surprise me!

    "These parasites lye in my veins..."

    I think you meant "lie". =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Anthony,

    You are an amazing writer... You get the emotion to be reflected in your poems.. and that is just amazing.. My favorite part was:

    "These parasites lie in my veins...

    And taunt me as I go insane... "

    Good job!

    ~BJ~