by Anthony Oct 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
As I trace your outline, |
Amazing!!!! keep it up! |
by Truest Lies
Well, there was a little mistake where you put "you lips" and I think it would have sounded better if it was "your lips" with an R on the you, but apart from that it was a little...um, mature for me, of course, but still, it was about love, which was very nice, and yes, it did sound quite a bit like Atomic's poem, but very good job, none the less! |
by Atomic
Humph! It sounds a lot like the plot I have in me poem "Ecstatic Tears" You plot thief! |