Humph! It sounds a lot like the plot I have in me poem "Ecstatic Tears" You plot thief!

5/5 because it's too damn good and I can't stay mad!

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Well, there was a little mistake where you put "you lips" and I think it would have sounded better if it was "your lips" with an R on the you, but apart from that it was a little...um, mature for me, of course, but still, it was about love, which was very nice, and yes, it did sound quite a bit like Atomic's poem, but very good job, none the less!

Good Writing!
beth

Amazing!!!! keep it up!
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