by Megann Lee Oct 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
When I fall, I can't seem to get back up. When I break down, I count on you for help. If your not here, who'll pick me up every-time I fall? |
by MudkipzPlx
Aww..How cute. |
by HansRik
This poem is very well written, with an efficient diction. I find it easy to relate to this poem. The structure is somewhat confusing,but I reckon that is a typographical error which you can correct easily. Anyways, very emotive and heartflet. Well done! |
Wow. I can relate a lot to this poem. Nicely written. One suggestion is maybe try hitting the 'enter' key, because when it's in a paragraph like that, it's kind of jumbled together. Other than that, this was a really good poem! I really felt the emotion! Great job! 5/5 |