The Eyes That Saved Me

by Poetic Tragedy08   Oct 12, 2005


Suffering these dreams
In a cold dark that penetrates the sun
Lying as I watch the deceptions
I flow deeper into my bed

Hateful screams echo around
The still night stands in place
Screaming tears are strolling
Knifes jab through the night

Steel penetrates my hateful flesh
Tossing and turning with burning dreams
I take a look into the eyes that saved me

The devil withdraws his evil
A shining light has entered the room
I kneel and tears burn my swollen eyes
The dying fades away and the dark disappears

Slowly, day by day, my heart mends
The nights of torturing close their doors
I was never so broken inside
Evils door is ajar, waiting for my dreams
The only place now where I suffer
The smile that formed from your eyes leaves

Awakened in sweat and blood from my eyes
I cry alone by myself where I'm known

I long for your touch, but until then
I'll look to the place where my heart is
Your eyes are the fire that saved me

Yes yes, I know, it SUCKS!! but this was more just to get it out of my system type poem ya know?! So take it easy on me!! Hope ya like it

Dedicated to the love of my life with the most beautiful eyes in a lifetime

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  • 19 years ago

    by `*~1-lUv~*`

    I read ur poems n in the end u always say they suck. Well they dont there really good. U r very talented. Keep up the good work1
    -HUGS N KISSES!

  • 19 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This was an wonderful poem you have wrote for the one you love forever and always and it's great to have that person around. :) i hope you show her your writing skills because your very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    No, this poem wasn't bad, at all. It was a little...confusing, though. Perhaps the story should have been cleared up just a little bit?
    Never mind. I liked it anyway.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • Thats soooo sweet...i really loved it...5/5...u really deserved it...i mean u r sooo talented i love the way u write poemz...never change...keep in touch..
    love alwayz
    preciosa