Dreams and disaster

by sandy   Oct 12, 2005


Last night it happened again...
the clouds lifted, the haze disappeared...your strong, handsome face came shining thru like the sun after a cloud burst...My breath taken from me the moment I seen your brown eyes looking at me, and the smile running across your face like the reflection of colors crossing thru a piece of crystal....
This is the 4th time you entered my midnight mind...each one bringing new and exciting events into our lives...holding hands, the first kiss, the romantic words of a song...the ring, proposal, even the erotic love making....and...
brrrrrr--ing!!

DARN ALARM CLOCK!!!
I wake up and find your not there....in your place is a man who is not you...one who holds no love...no interest....no idea!

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  • 19 years ago

    by derek

    Hey i like your poem its so good nothin lik mine look at some of mine
    slit hated father you know by me you son by mom

  • 19 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Whoa-I love the twist at the end.Technically though you may want to break the first couple paragraphs more into some line/stanza structure(just a suggestion).You capture the emotion so well and that ending-brutal and honest.Excellent piece.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*~almost ur cinderella~*~

    I like dis poem its good keep up da good work ~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    Hahah.. yes i get those nights too. Stupid alarms. =)

    beautiful writing, I looove it.

    Take care XxOo

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