Hahah.. yes i get those nights too. Stupid alarms. =)

beautiful writing, I looove it.

Take care XxOo

I like dis poem its good keep up da good work ~*~

Whoa-I love the twist at the end.Technically though you may want to break the first couple paragraphs more into some line/stanza structure(just a suggestion).You capture the emotion so well and that ending-brutal and honest.Excellent piece.

Hey i like your poem its so good nothin lik mine look at some of mine
slit hated father you know by me you son by mom