OMG...NOT A GOOD POEM:O
that was greta.. i thought you're way of putting it was just amazing..your words..wow.
No i liked the set out it flowed really well...
hmm...well i htink its good that you can't hurt yourself!! take care hun
xoxoxo

Your rite its not gd its bloody brilliant! i love the fact that you use a gr8 range of vocab and it all rymes as well!

BAD POEM????????? No way, hun. This was a really good poem. I really liked it. I liked the way it flowed together. I really enjoy reading your poetry. You are an awesome poet, so keep on writing. 5/5! Great Job!
~BJ~

Bad??? Huh.. Lol, not at all. 5/5!
And yeah, it's good that you can't hurt yourself. =)

I didnt exactly.... get the message, but i really did like the rhyming and you're right... i use me and see and you and do way too often. i'll try to expand my vocabulary; thanks