by Katran
This is f u c k e n awesome. i hav tears in my eyes because i can relate so much. i no that pain...i think. good luck. 5/5 |
Wow! This is absolutly amazing! I love it, it's great. 5/5! |
by catherine
Hey cathy doesn't really know u but she loves ur poem its awesome and she answered all of ur ?s so if ya do wanna talk let me know e-mail me or something sftbllplaya55@themyus.com or im me at musicslife755 |
by Just Another Chemical Romance
Omg this explains my life better than anything ivr ever read before. i know how it feels when ppl say they know how you feel or when they tell you what you should feel, they just dont know. |
by Razorblade
Simply terrific! |
Im just speachless realy, i have no idea how to describe how breathtaking that poem was. It was full of so much emotion and expressed what a lot of us cant even put into words as good as you did. You realy are very talented and a brilliant writer. wow. |
by skyfox
Thankyou thankyou for sharing those thoughts so well. I have tried so hard to understand and I haven't Your very well written poem has given me an insight I never had. It cruels me that you feel like this and wish I could help but I have nothing but caring. keep writing we need to hear this |
This poem was good...5/5...i understood what you were trying to say and i been in almost the same situation...well keep up the awesome work...you are truly a good writer...l8r, jen |
by Naaria
I can easily relate to this poem... TOO easily. |
by Isabel
I love this poem i went through so many deppression too in my past |
by Torn
Wow...u r awesome!! that poem, like many said expressed what i thought i could never put into words. the way the knife encorporates u and ur soul, the way u feel towards others..i totally agree. I hate it cos i wish i could say something to answer those questions, but they'd just be hypocritical. |
by Malika
I can relate to this poem its very well done, the rhyming is amazing, and the feelings you describe are very precise. Theresa few problems with the rythm in some verses but it doesnt really make a difference. Excellent! |
Great poem. Loved it. |
Its one of the best poems i have ever read.. i loved ur job and it made me cry.. i can relate to this poem .. i always wanted to write sumthin like that but didnt have the courage to.. thats why this made me cry .. thank u so much for writing this poem..its an amazing job..the best ..i assure u..nd i kno u can notice this..lots of ppl wrote u comments.. love u loadz..keep it up the best job..thanx again |
by Hades
Heart wrenching and personal, the perfect combination, well done |
How does everything you say seem to complete the way i feel evrery moment of my life. How do you understand so well what so many seem to ask why?...lol ^^ i love it read my poems and comment! ^^ |
by Leona
Wow GREAT POEM And I can actually see how you feel i have gone through every question and I do Understand |
by Joey P
This is one of the best poems I can across here. I know how it feels also and its very hard for me cause I'm living with depression for a very longtime and I'm coming off a hard break up. I feel like just giving up but there something that's holding me back. Its probably the love I have for her, but stay strong and God will guide you like he trying with me. Great poem. |
by Matt Carroll
I cannot help you nor heal you, but I do know the feeling, its strange how well I relate to this one... |
by hEaRt BrOkEn
That's a really good poem I would give it a 100!!! |