Great job

OMFG dat was so0o0o0o0 good i abosouluty lovd it. it was just so excellent.wel done hope u dnt feel dat way but if u do u get thru it eventually
xoxo

That was the best cuttin poem i have read.. i can totally relate to it.. i like the part where it says:

and if u try to smile do u smile with a twist?

my favorite part! this poem really relates to me wenever i have problems because i too hate wen people tell me that they understand wen they have no idea! good job*

That was an amazing poem wow .. i really liked it, it really jumped out and grabbed u into it ... Kepp up the great work

;[ thats really sad. good job

I love you baby. I don't have the answers that you search for b/c the are different for everyone, but I want you to know that I care sweetie and I love you.

-Tainted Mikochan

10374 visits and 582 votes making the rating 4.8...i really dont think my comment would carry any value here but then its very hard to stop myself than accepting the fact....this has been the best of all poems that i hv read so far in this site and DARE if i give any advice to u...just one suggestion..do keep writing forever..all the best..Nitin Mongia

This poem is how i feel nice work ....

Excellent poem, 5/5 stars..i can't really say that i can relate to this poem, but i know people who feel that way, and it sucks because you can't help them out! but i really liked this poem ur very talented!

I know how u feel

WOW! all of your poems are amazing. No one ever knows how you feel. Ive thought about suicide so many times!! i dont cut i have, but i dont. i actually talked to my mom about it last night and she said it was rediculous and only for attention. some ppl just dont understand. my best friend used to cut.I almost lost her to it! Im sorry tho! your writng is amazing!!!

Thats great i love it

Amazing... absolutely amazing!

You are a wounderful poet and person deep down. poem was very good graet job.

I can relate to all of this...it's just sums everything up...it's what I've been trying totell people that say that they understand where I'm coming from and they dont'. THey say that they just cope without self-harm, but for me it's the only way out of reality...sometimes I just can't help but to do it even when nothing's wrong. Private message me...I would very much appreciate it!

Very well written. Although it is a very used way of expressing suicide, you still put a LOT of emotion into it, without cluttering the poem.

Good Writing!
beth

Hey Tina,

I am not going to give you advice because I have never been through what you have. The only thing I am going to do is offer you support if you should need it. I do understand you to some extent as I have had severe depression for about 2 years and I have attempted the deed. I hope you are okay and please if you need to talk, send me an email. Take care sweetie and continue writing such amazing pieces of writing. They are inspiring and bring tears to my eyes! CONGRATS!! =)

Love ya, Tess xx

Wow! your poem is so incredible. it shows so much of you, i dunno what to say it was just THAT stunning. please write more they are amazing.

This is reallly good keep up the great work...i hope everything gets better for you..

Will you tell me otherwise
When I say "you won't understand"?
Answer me this question
Have you sat with a knife in your hand?

Deff. my favorite part. People try to give me advice all the time -- i listen even thought it usually doesnt change anything-- like you said they obviously dont understand. and To answer your question. I do sit with knife in hand.

Stay Strong