HEY! YOUR POEMS ARE SO TOUCHiNG..i LOVE THEM ALL i CONSTANLY READ THEM OVER AND OVER AGAiN, i CANNOT RESiST. THERE SO WELL WRiTTEN. i HOPE EVERYTHiNG GETS BETTER AND i UNDERSTAND LiFE iSENT THE MOST "GREATEST" THiNG iN THE WORLD..TRUST ME..i HATE iT TOO...
-KEEP THE FAiTH-
BRiANNA_x3

I think this is my favortitw poem!! it is me to the exact word!!! i do all of this so in a scence i can tell u i know how i feel but i hate wen ppl say that to me so i will say i can relate/!!! wow this is great hit me up some time so we can talk!!!20/10

This is a very good poem. im soory ur going through this

That true, people can't heal your heart or amke your cuts heal, but they can stand by you, be there for you, and just give u a shoulder to cry on. Great poem! :-)

I really like this poem I can really relate to this. Everybody always says they know what I'm going through, and they tell me that they have it worse than I do. I really hate it, because they have no idea.
I really like reading your poems. Keep writing.
much love x3 Lucy

Amazing ! outta this world... love ur poem... i feel the same damn way since i lost a friend & ppl around r trying to cheer me up saying nothin's lost...
u must read my poem
"murder or suicide" that i wrote for him... u'll know what i mean.
ur poem got 5/5 it actually deserves 10/5
love
amy

I love this poem it is exactly how i use to feel when i was depressed you are a great poet keep it up and keep in touch

Great great great great

Wow, ive never read a poem that i could relate to so much. everyone around here thinks that if their parents yell at them that they have it bad. and then theres people who actually go throught things, and they always try to help me but no one really understands. and that poem seriously like 100% speaks the truth. i think all people who try to help other people with their problems should read that poem before speaking again.

-Dreamer-

Wow i can see why yourthe best ranked poet in this site...your simply amazing

Wow..i don't have words for this poems...is way too deep...escellent writer..Do you have you own book I can buy?..You are a genuis..

Very deep, and sad. i love it!
it had a perfect flow to it 5/5+

Yes to your questions......

**caSSi3**

Love it♥

This is amazing
im not gonna say i know how you feel, because i dont..
i think most people can relate to some parts tho
its one of the best...
keep it up
xxxx

This is really good and i did answer all the questions and yea ivee done the same thing and im looking for advice to so yea maybe you can help me out

Hey this is a very good poem. i love how u write it. im very sorry for everything u have been going through. and ill pray for u ok?

I"m not going to say this poem was beautiful. Because it wasn't. It was an amazing peice of work expressing pain, anger, and distress. Suicide or cutting isn't a beautiful thing.

I will say though, this poem I can relate to. You expressed emotion very well, and I could see it in almost every-single-word. 5/5 not because of the flow, but because of how well you expressed yourself, and you did it to where people could read it very, very easily.

The stanza I thought was the best was

Would you tell me to stop the cutting
Because what I do is wrong?
Will you try to convince me again
That I'm really very strong?

Because that is usually ALWAYS said when someone finds out that another person is suicidal. IT can probably relate to anyone who has ever thought of or attempted suicide.

Welcome to my favourites Tina.

Love it

I'm truly sorry for your loses and your experiences that you have been through. Me myself have not gone through anything even remotely close to what you have. Your poem is excellent.... well excellent isn't quite the word i want to use because a poem that says how you cant remember how many times you've tried to commit isnt really excellent. but the words you've used and the things you said made excellent sense and touched me.. i'm sorry. i hope you figure out what you want and get it....