Everything you just said except for loosing friends is my life...everything you said I feel...I loved it...WOW

@...this is such a deep poem with a great meaning.,..ur right, a lot of ppl say they understand, but really they dont have a clue:(:(...Great poem...Luv, Lisa...@

WOW! that was soo AMAZING! i adored that.. it was just so excellent! wow.. you truly have a talent and i think you used it to its highest potential in this poem! truly excellent! the only little problem i found was here..

Have you found yourself to think
^ i think you should take out the "to", it would make more sense with the next line then! :)

other than that, all i can say is.. wow.. that was an excellent poem! 10/5!

This was a really nice poem... I might know what your going through... Ive almost gave my life up but I thought and realized life is too precious... Take care...

~Antonia Palomo~

I have felt the same way.... and its hard....just live life(if thats what its called) and keep writeing your poems...i love them...

Its very good. as ive said before im a fan of your work

Right Tina I'm going to answer you're questions, 1 yes I do know what it's like to have cutting as your only resort, 2 yes I do know what it's like to lose you're best friends to suicide, 3 yes I have stayed up all night crying, 4 yes I have taken drugs but you know what I've never even thought of suicide because me and you know what it's like to lose someone too it how could you do that to somebody and don't tell me there's nobody. Look babe I feel for you and not alot of people can.

Tina babe I've got something to say, 1 I know what it's like to have cutting as a last resort, 2 I know what it's like to lose your bestfriends to suicide, 3 I have stayed up crying all night, 4 I have taken drugs but you know what I've never ever thought of suicide, you know why becuase you and me both know what suicide does to people that cared about the person that died and in my opinion it's wrong to put anyone through that I also think it's wrong to tell people you are gonna kill yourself because if you actually were you wouldn't tell people you'd just do it, sorry if you find that offensice but everyone's intitled to there opinion and that's mine, so I'm not telling you to get on with it I'm telling you to think about who you're hurting then change your mind. That's all

Ok didn't think the 1st one had posted but hey know you have two

U have uncover the truth that’s hidden for tears to b written
And hate to b slittin ….. i love I just love it thanks I would love to read more of ur poems u'll c me around later (^_^)

Wow your poem is really deep...i like it...and i love the part were it's like smile with a twist.

This is really good. I liked your discriptions in this poem. 5/5 You are a great writter!

Hey this poem is awsome I can seriously relate to this all my friends say they understand but they dont!!This poems shows that!!I wish i could write something half that good
~Linzii

Thats great how you can understand what you truly feel all you gotta do is answer the questions yourself

Hey wow that was a great poem i wish i could be good like you you are a insperation for me!!!! i hope you know that im pretty new at this but if you read any of my poems i hope you can tell me how to make them better thank you so much!!!!! Brittney

WOW-
your poems are all fantastic. I love to read them. I'm sorry about what has happened with you, and that your poems come from those experiances. You really are a talented person. Have good holidays!
*Sara

Hun listen everything in your poeem i understand what your saying i ask the same questions and Yes .. its hard i used to be a cutter and you kno what . i understand its the only pain you control thats why you do it yes it feels fine and you feel every time u cut u think ou forget a little piece of unhappiness or heartache .. I UNDERSTAND ... Hopefulyl ou read this and hopefully i can save a life .. You need to understand we were all put here on earth for a reason and that Yes we all go through problems and mayb ur's are very extreme but i have been threw it too .. plus my dad isn't in jail atleast you have some cocslure that he's locked up and not able to hurt you again but mie is running loose and i'm afiard everyday if he's coming back ... I lost two friends to sucuide in the same year 3 months apart ... I know how you feel and you know what they were my BEst freinds ... They understood everything about me .. Just please Stay Strong ...

Just know There's always someone out ther who cares ,... and you kno what I care because i know how you feel ...

Tina

Wow this is really good. i loved the way you out things into questions. 5/5

I know how you feel...,for i feel the same way....,no one will ever know the pain we both have......,that poem you just wrote.......,you said my life....,the only thing is i know that that u probebly wont even see this comment

Holy crap you are the most brillant writer i have read! i really like your poems and i can relate in a lot of ways..not all but most...keep the good poems coming:)
sam