In 12 stanzas you just expressed all these jumbled thoughts that have refused to organize over the last 3 years of my life.
5/5, absolutely amazing.

It was great my fave bit was

If you try to help me out
Don't assume you know how I feel
The truth is you can't mend my heart
And you can't make my cuts heal

I LOVE THIS POEM U HAVE TRUE TALENT KEEP IT UP !

That was a kickass poem.

That was a kickass poem.

This is probably the best poem I have seen on here thus far. Good work. Amazing poem and the questions are so entirely true. Great work.
10/10

Wow. I know u wrote this in 2005 but this is a great write.its so sad andn i can really relate to this poem. I hope ur doing bettr now.

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!

I mean it relates to me in so many ways. you're an amazing writer. wow. 5/5

Wow thats so freakin deep and i feel u too... i hate when ppl think they can help ugh, this is a well written piece.

Yes.

:'(

Gorgeous,sad poem.. x

Everything you described is how i used to feel!! apart from the drugs thing i never done any!! but i did cut, and i did wish for death and i have lost 3 friends because of suicide. your words are amazing... when you write, your emotions pour out and it's like i can almost feel what you are feeling.. i agree with you on your last verse ... noone can pretend to know how your feeling unless they are feeling it to.. i'm not saying i know how your feeling but i have been there.. i'm not anymore thanks to the rock band avenged sevenfold and reading poems.. your a good writer.. i always look forward to read any new ones x

Yes to every question in your poem apart from the drugs bit. I was depressed for a very long time, i remember sitting on the bathroom floor with a razor blade and i remember slicing it across my skin, i remember thinking that if i cut deep enough the pain will fade it never did. I also remember all my friends saying they understood but they didnt.

Im not depressed anymore, i met my current boyfriend and he really helped me over come my depression, i dont smile with a twist anymore for the first time in a very long time i was smiling for real.

I still have scars all down my arms to remind me but they are fading. Im happy for once.

All im saying is dont give up on life you never know what your going to miss

This is so deep.. I dont say i understand everything..but just want to say that you handled yourself well,because this poem was writtwn long time back... I would love to read more from you.

I know, noone can help

This is just one amazing poem straight from every cutters heart. I often say to those people these same things. Well done 5/5

So very strong to my heart years ago i was everything in this poems.. now i did get strong and kind of beat depression arse even through it creeps up now and then such a lovely piece of work look forward to reading more such a good writer well done and if this really was about you hope you have overcome this would really like a update xx

Well written & well understood & relatible. Thank you for sharing.

Read this first in '08, didn't have an account because I wasn't ready to share. My best friend had just killed himself and everyday I was struggling to not follow him down that road. Your words are from the heart, and the fact that they flow off the tongue is a plus in my book. Thanks for the help you didnt know you gave me almost 10 years ago.
-Tony