THIS IS JUST BEAUTIFUL....u r really in love gurl....thats good...u can tell cuz of how u be writing. I feel the same way about my baby...whenever we are apart even if its for less than 24 hrs. thats just love....it was great and i truly loved it...5/5...

Amazin speachless u r gd girl n u can tell u lovew ya boi keep it up xxx

Aww that is so sweet renee
it must have been hard!

I loved your rhyming and the emotions you placed in your writing

Keep up your great work!