by Just Another Dreamer Oct 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I'm walking through the dark street, alone when suddenly a street lamp comes on. That's when it clicked. You are like the street lamp. Before you came into my life, it was dark, scary. Then the moment you came to me, it startled me. I couldn't help but want to run and hide in the dark, what I'm used to. But as soon as I dared open my eyes, I was amazed by the breath taking veiw in front of me. |
by Koby Smith
Nice |
by Koby Smith
Nice |
by Ryan Linton
This is good, I wrote a poem once about a streetlight, yours is a lot more upbeat, I like it. |
by TinyDancer46
I love this, it's a great comparison and very sweet!!! Good job, keep up the great work. 5/5 |