This is fantastic and i can relate to it so much. I love the story it tells.

Wow!! very goot!! i gave u a 5!!!! very good, very impressed keep up the good work!!

Wow so powerful
keep it up huni
take care love kirsty xxx

Hey hunn! well i decided to go back and read your first ones too...i started with the first though, you know to see the progression! :P anyway very good hunn! -xxx-

*sighs* very good poem. And very true i must say. If it is true, your guide will always be there to give you signs that your loved one is trying to get through. Love ya babe!
Rosie xXx

AWWW! How sad! :D I love my cluband everyone in it! :D
PV

I....hate.... you!

ahaha well done hun, I dont know what else to say, other then your english is soooo much better then mine I hate you Lol. I love this! keep it up, well duh you have but you kno what I mean lol

Jenn

Oh mona that was so beautiful. If I'd told you those things I'd be so proud of you. that was a really lovely first poem even tho it was really sad. *hugs*