My Addiction

by Jamie   Oct 12, 2005


If you read this slow it sounds like crap but if you read it fast without pausing at the ends of each line it sounds a little better lol

My eyes have been
Drowning in tears
For a few minutes now
When they can no longer
Suppress the detriment
Nor hold their breath anymore
They will let it all go
They will truly bleed their pain
Maybe I like this
Or maybe I need this
The only time my heart doesnt
Torment my body is when
These feelings turned toxic
Pour from my darkened eyes
They asphyxiate the suffering
And for an hour or two
I can dance with my tears
In my own world of sugarcoated
Feelings which I cannot face alone
But then again I am alone
Therapy in its paramount form
Time most wisely spent
Was alone in my room
Entranced and in sync
With all my vexations

***Crying is the best way to get through any pain and it can sometimes be entertaining admit it lol***

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  • 19 years ago

    by .

    Aww this is so good!! its not bad at all! 5/5 keep it up
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay i fixed that line "im alone but then again i am alone" now its how its meant to be read or whatever

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    I admit it! lol. this line sounded a little weird: Alone but then again I am alone. that doesnt make any sense, otherwise the poem was great

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Good poem, Keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Crying is fine.. I cry a lot, feel like a baby, but nevertheless.. lol.. Um, and yeah, cutting will do nothing.. sorry.. It's just, yeah, unhealthy as torn apart said. I'm glad this -is- on crying, and not cutting.. heh.. 5/5 Great job.