by Jamie Oct 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
If you read this slow it sounds like crap but if you read it fast without pausing at the ends of each line it sounds a little better lol |
by .
Aww this is so good!! its not bad at all! 5/5 keep it up |
by Jamie
Okay i fixed that line "im alone but then again i am alone" now its how its meant to be read or whatever |
by Carmen
I admit it! lol. this line sounded a little weird: Alone but then again I am alone. that doesnt make any sense, otherwise the poem was great |
by Dark Kitten
Good poem, Keep it up. |
by x Saiya
Crying is fine.. I cry a lot, feel like a baby, but nevertheless.. lol.. Um, and yeah, cutting will do nothing.. sorry.. It's just, yeah, unhealthy as torn apart said. I'm glad this -is- on crying, and not cutting.. heh.. 5/5 Great job. |