by xlostxsoulx
Crying isnt the only way......cutting makes the pain go. |
by ScarletHaze
Lol *raises hand* i admits it too xox |
by Torn
Ignore what they said^^because crying is healthy..cutting isn't... |
That is a very good poem, Jamie. I really like your work. I can relate with you on this as well. Great job on this poem. I liked the flow and I love how you use big words. Great job, hun! Keep up the great work! |
by x Saiya
Crying is fine.. I cry a lot, feel like a baby, but nevertheless.. lol.. Um, and yeah, cutting will do nothing.. sorry.. It's just, yeah, unhealthy as torn apart said. I'm glad this -is- on crying, and not cutting.. heh.. 5/5 Great job. |
by Dark Kitten
Good poem, Keep it up. |
by Carmen
I admit it! lol. this line sounded a little weird: Alone but then again I am alone. that doesnt make any sense, otherwise the poem was great |
by Jamie
Okay i fixed that line "im alone but then again i am alone" now its how its meant to be read or whatever |
by .
Aww this is so good!! its not bad at all! 5/5 keep it up |