Good poem.I just don't like the third stanza.I don't think thats needs to be in a love poem.

Very good. It is what i used to go through when i was younger (about 4 years ago). This poem is another of your best ive read.

~*That was really great 5/5...

Love is a simple emotion,
It's like you taking a potion,
It's like the girl next door,
It makes you want to talk to her more

I love that part great work keep it up*~ XoXo

That's cute!