I really Like this poem. and it means alot to me..

Its a really good defiantly deep but deeps good 5/5

Why all those 'quotes' abput please voting your poems? You shouldn't do that, you poems are really AMAZING!

Wow thats really an awesome poem. I like how you incorporated so much into one piece of writing. It was really deep. Thanks for the comment on my poem too. = D

This poem is very beautiful, its got great flow,and the ryhming is great. keep up the wonderful work/

I really like this poem its great so much meaning maybe you could look at some of my stuff

This by far is my favorite of your poems that I've read. The imagagery that your words created was beautiful. Keep up the amazing work!
> Kiesha

Great poem.I like the emotion you used in it.

Wow that poem was like otheres said deeper then most. i cant imagine somepeople gettin lost in those words. my ONLY suggestion is that u space out the stanzas like every 4 lines just put a space ya kno? cos i lost my place a few times then got confused cos i skipted a line so yea just spacing otherwise awesome!

*O*M*G*...I SO LOVE THIS POEM...I TOTALLY SEE WHERE YOU WERE COMMING FROM WHEN YOU WROTE THIS...ITS GREAT...I GIVE IT A 5!!!

Aww....this is such a freakin awsome poem. Its so well written. Your a really good writer keep it up k? later....

OMG!!!!..this is probably the best poem i've heard in the past 5 years..so deep and emotional....i just absolutely loved it!!...its like words can't explain what i thought when i read this...my jaw literally dropped....great work once again..*rates 5*
meg

WOW THATS BRILLIANT>>> love your word choices..you're liek me i love deep meanignful words. AWESOMEEEEEEE XXLISSA

Your poems are very good! I love them. Please check out my poems and let me know what you think of them. Thank you.
Burning~Wings

This one might be my favorite. Good work on it.

Great write..i enjoyed reading it.
keep up the good work. :)