Today.

by Mrs Reynolds- far from fixed   Oct 12, 2005


Endless violence, we are silenced by those who are superior
We grow wearier of feeling inferior, our shouts shut in our interior.
On the exterior we try to do our best to impress
Mirrors are never given a rest but our true thoughts are suppressed
Those who are blessed are so obsessed and vain, looking good to entertain
Joining on the fashion train, media has the world gripped in there .look good. campaign.
All alone our true emotions are expressed when we are on our own
We moan secretly wishing to have someone by our side, or for our sadness to be shown
We groan as we help others, but get nothing back
Not giving is what this generation does lack
It is a fact we look after number one,
Taking drugs to stimulate our fun,
Simulate others actions, compete until we have won,
This world is done, it’s a downward spiral into which we all fall

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  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I actually like the way this reads. I felt I was reading faster and faster, getting lost on a train.. It was very clever. Well done. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by corey mcmillan

    Great poem i like your style. thanks for reading and commenting on mine. i have another called zombie tales you should read it and let me know what you think when you get time.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent, excellent, excellent! Of all the many I have read today this is by far the best. You are so talented. Every bit of this poem reached one hundred percent perfection, from the words to the structure, I loved it!!! 555555555555555/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is one of the best poems I've read today. I don't think much about it, but life can be really sad sometimes. Incredible write!

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow so true!!
    liked it...the rhythms were sometimes confused but overall nice job:P
    take care xoxoxo

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