This is fantastic! I like that it links how feeling like you look bad on the outside makes you feel bad on the inside. It's weird that people who are beautiful don't realise it, and think they're ugly, so in their attempt to make themselves "beautiful" actually make themselves ugly.

Omg, definetly my fav. poem of the week. it is soo soo true!!

loooove it!!

Wow this is a really good poem.. good job done

The constant rhyming gives it the imprression of confusion, justb over and over,k endless tumult of confuoin. Good way to imitate life!! good job

Wow so true!!
liked it...the rhythms were sometimes confused but overall nice job:P
take care xoxoxo

This is one of the best poems I've read today. I don't think much about it, but life can be really sad sometimes. Incredible write!

Excellent, excellent, excellent! Of all the many I have read today this is by far the best. You are so talented. Every bit of this poem reached one hundred percent perfection, from the words to the structure, I loved it!!! 555555555555555/5

Great poem i like your style. thanks for reading and commenting on mine. i have another called zombie tales you should read it and let me know what you think when you get time.

I actually like the way this reads. I felt I was reading faster and faster, getting lost on a train.. It was very clever. Well done. xx