My Friend.....he's suicidal

by *heidi;   Oct 12, 2005


My friend
he tried to kill himself
not just once
but many times

he stabbed himself
he tried hanging himself
he drank a whole thing of bleach
he tried getting ran over in the streets

he thought that no one cared
and that i wasn't there
it made me feel bad
i cried and was really sad

he said he wanted to shoot
but luckily he found no gun
cuz if so
he'd be D.E.A.D.

i care for him dearly
it hurt me severely
to find that he was suicidal
to me it was a scandal

it made me cry
and wanna die
i am so sad
and feel so bad

he better never
try it again
i hope he'll be alright
cuz he isn't always in my sight!

this is true. the poem isn't that good, i know. but i had to let my feelings out. please vote and comment. it would be much appreciated. i'm going through a hard time now!

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  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow im so sorry that your friend is doing this. i hope you can reason with him so he can stop or get some help. I liked this poem 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel

    I feel for ya on this one. I dealt with a friend like that for 2 years before he finally got the help he needed. It takes time but it works out in the end.

  • 19 years ago

    by ashley

    Wow i was in a situation like that but it was a gurl i have a lot of friends like that and i would hate fo them to try and kill themselfs ova something stupid though but keep ya head up

  • 19 years ago

    by angela s

    It's hard to see your friend like that I know I've been there just stay strong and be there for him and hopfully he will pull through. But keep writing some times it's the best way to get your thoughts out.Great job

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Sέxγ*Måmї~

    GOOD POEM! SORRY UR GOING THRU THIS..
    I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEMS SO KEEP WRITING! AND I GAVE U 5/5!