A fine work, lol. seriously though, a different angle i havn't read much about before, but i'm sure taht one will always rank pretty high.

Aww dis poem was sad to but i enjoyed reading it
n if true i'm sori kk
so tke care luv ya think abt u always lol
mwa xoxox

Kno exactly wat u mean...gr8 poem...u have a gr8 gift of writing...keep it up! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Hey....really good poem!!thanx for helping me find that other one! ya i know what you mean...5/5
-Amanda-

Awsome. :) *5/5*

Wow..great job..* I hate when parents try to control you. I really do. We need to make our own decisions every once in a while and they never let us...I am going through this problem at the moment with my mom..Good job hunn* 5/5

Another fantastic poem
Im impressed every time, i love your work.
~Em