Reality of Dreams (Etheree)

by Jacklyn   Oct 13, 2005


Day
dreaming
peacefully
fading slowly
Gracefully floating
Blooming comfort settles
Withdrawing nightmares of day
giddiness flourishes throughout
Capturing happiness, so we think
disguising reality making dreams

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  • 19 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Whoa, deep.

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Pretty, thats how i found this piece it took me to a comforting place, of beauty and inspiration. Great job keep up the good work...

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Awesome Etheree deep truth

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    You amaze me.

    - I've got little time to comment; It's midnight and i've got exams to study for. Just thought i'd make sure you were okay and tell you that i'll be back to writing and commenting in 3 weeks when i finish school :D

    Love you more than life my friend,
    - Kalah.

  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    Beautiful Etheree!

    (sorry, I don't think I'll be participating this week in TOW...for some reason, I just can't seem to find any inspiration to write. If I come up with something, I'll post it. take care)

    keep up the good work!

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