Last Thoughts

by Falling Up   Oct 13, 2005


Ive never been so close to someone,
Yet seem so far away.
I look into your eyes
And you've got no words to say

Though your eyes are silent,
I can't help but see,
The hatred you feel,
Is this goodbye to me?

Slashing my soul, cutting me deep
I thought it was true,
Your love,
What now I cant keep?

A rage so violent in words,
I don't want to believe its true,
Do u really hate me that much?
Is it over? Are we now through?

You've killed my mind ,
I leave slamming your door
Keeping pain between us.
Feels like battling in war.

As I walk down the road,
I feel weakness inside,
I want you to know,
How much I've truly tried.

Though you don't see it,
I have cried ever night,
Wishing our past was gone,
And hoping for a new light.

As im crossing the street,
I take one final glance,
I see you running my way,
Hoping you'll give me, one final chance.

You open your mouth,
but no words can come out,
I see you but a mere second,
Your trying to shout.

As fast as it had happened
It was just as quickly taken away
A drunk driver had hit her that night
Took her life, and now she's the one to pay.

Just before she left the world,
He whispered in her ear
"I love you, don't forget it"
down his stained face, rolled a silent tear.

But time was too quick
For she was already gone,
The true feelings behind his rage,
Will always be looked upon

As the last thing he said to her,
Before she was hit,
Were his true feelings
That he was too afraid to admit.

He didn't get to say goodbye,
They left each other with hate,
He really truly loved her,
Although not fair, her fate.

Tell someone, what you really feel
Don't keep it inside your heart
For tomorrow could be the ending
And youll forever be apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hi hi hi...this was so emotional and so intense...i am in love with this poem...well i believed that i shud tell wat i feel too...but after i did...things got screwd up. WAY WAY TOO BADLY...all i did was tell her i LIKED her even tho now i think i loved her...and she said no at first..then ignored...and wat not...i got robbed of all my feelings...and she didnt even bother at all. anyway...keep writing i loved it. btw i and that girl are okay now so im doing pretty good...(not completely okay yet...dont they say that the wounds on the heart never completely go away?)

    anyway if u could read, rate n comment on a poem i recently wrote...i'd love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by mary

    ITS VERY TRUE FINALLY WHO UNDERSTANDS

  • 19 years ago

    by .

    Wow..this is REALLY good...5/5 deffinately keep it up
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Lovely. Wonderful message at the end, well told story/lesson. Don't be afraid of love, let the ones you love know how much you care about them...you never know what tomorrow brings.

    Thanks.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    Good damn poem.
    And yeah theres lesbians kissing on your picture...
    Lol anyways
    Check out my account.
    My poetry if u like them tell me.
    Love
    JP
    5/5