Comments : Take the pain away

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaime

    Wow, ya know when I was reading this I could see somebody up on stage singing it. Nothing very nice about picking up a knife, but it was still good. I like the second to last verse, it was well worded.
    Doesn't matter if ya don't come on this site very much, I still like to see what you're writing when you do. Keep up the great work.
    ~Jaime