Great! another small thing that makes hardly any difference... throught out the forst 2 stanzas the frist to lines rhyme and the last two lines rhyme, but in the last stanza only the second and fourth line rhyme... sorry if you did this on purpose.
but all in all great rhyme, grwat flow... it worked really well.

*jackie*

Another great one. :) *5/5*

Wow i love this line:
though your screams break the silence
they don't make a sound

amazing.

Raw.
It was like it was peeling skin off my body.
I love poems that make you feel.
Anticipation for your next submission
love
~Em

WOW, extremely powerfull.. Its amazing.. one of your best I think!!!