Greatly written, i dont normally like/read poems from the love section but this poem was truely amazing, just one small little thing -
"You say you're a nice guy
And you properly are"
maybe make it *probably* not properly. but besides that it was very well written.

*jackie*

Its simplicity and emotion made this poem shine!
I know that a lot of people write about the topic of goodbye on this site, but you managed to make a whole new range out of an old topic. Nice!

Good Writing!
beth

I thoroughly enjoyed it.
sorry if my comments seem to become worse and worse but they're all just fantastic!
love
~Em