Unmentioned

by Katie McCullick   Oct 13, 2005


If you could feel what I do,
if you could see how I feel for you,
you may understand and not criticize,
what you see when you look in my eyes.
I know its hard to grasp it all,
and I know you won't catch me if I fall.
I wish one day you would be there,
but you're too busy being everywhere.
I just wanted to tell you that I exist,
because you don't know you make my eyes mist.
If what you see is that I'm sad and lonely,
its because you are my one and only.
But you'll never know cause you don't pay attention,
so i'll sit and dwell on the love I won't mention.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    Wow! just wow. this is so powerful!
    this has to be my favorate

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Katie, this is a really good poem. It hit me in the heart... I feel like that a lot... one thing I did notice, not a big deal or anything, but if you wanna fix it...

    "but your to busy being everywhere."

    I think you mean *you're too*

    Just a minor flaw, no worries. other than that, it was a very good poem! Keep on writing! You have a lot of potential, keep it up! :D

    Love always,
    ~BJ~