Katie, this is a really good poem. It hit me in the heart... I feel like that a lot... one thing I did notice, not a big deal or anything, but if you wanna fix it...

"but your to busy being everywhere."

I think you mean *you're too*

Just a minor flaw, no worries. other than that, it was a very good poem! Keep on writing! You have a lot of potential, keep it up! :D

Love always,
~BJ~

Wow! just wow. this is so powerful!
this has to be my favorate