1 an only
by kujo666 Oct 13, 2005
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I wont you i need you you are the only girl for me if i did not have you i wood wood not have eney thang you have the keys to my hart you are my word my my 1 and 1an only try love words can not say how much i love you and i will never let you go |
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19 years ago
Besides the grammer flaws, the poem is beautiful... some suggestions I have so that it's easier to read:
"I wont you"
~want* instead of wont?
"if i did not have you i wood wood not have eney thang"
~maybe... if I did not have you, I would not have anything?
"you have the keys to my hart you are my word my my 1 and 1an only "
~Maybe... You have the keys to my heart. You are my world, my one and only?
Other than that, it's really a good poem. The meaning BEHIND the words is very clear and I loved it. Good job.
~BJ~ -
19 years ago
Very very good i gave you five keep up good work!! don't stop writing
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19 years ago
by Mona
You have got your own style of writing. And I like that. Keep writing!
