Its breath taking. its a wonderfull poem! I love it.

Omg i felt like that a million of times i love this poem

Hey thanx for the comment this poem was so good I love it, so much sadness...
All the best!!.. always Jess..x

Wow, thats an amazing poem xxxx

I love it!!! And I also know exactly how you feel. I have a poem similar to that. It's called 'Escape'. You should read it!! Anyway, keep up the good work.

PixieCorpse

Hey butterfly i really don't know what to tell you .... it's great no actually it's breathtaking but i don't like the part of the blade it makes me freak out !!besides you're a butterfly and i can't imagine you in this image,anyways it's wonderfull !!
about your comment , actually i wasn't embaresed i was really heartbroken not knowing if he feels the same toward her !!and because if he does,well she'de be in my shoes !
lsn why don't you try to write a poem about what happend with you ??

Hey butterfly that's very nice no actually it's breathtaking!!but honestly i don't like the part of the blade,because you're a butterfly and i can't imagine you this way!!it's wondefull anyways!
about you're comment,actuallyi wasn't embaresed i was heartbroken,not knowing if he feels the same or not!and if he does well she's in my shoes right now!!but something happened yesterday and i can't understand anything anymore!!

Hehe omg why did i send you the comment twice !!!
so i'm a peacock huh?? do i seem that pompus??!! (well honestly all my friend think i'm a little bit over-proud );-)
well listen what happened : he sent me a msg written in it a song (it's like i still miss u and i still can't forget about u and so on ...and he wrote at the end this song always reminds me of u!!)so i replied by another song(saying i'm waiting for you no matter how much it hurts...and i wrote at last "this song always reminds me of you and every love song in the world reminds me of u") .
well this is the first time i show him anything !! oh my god you can't imagine how i was feeling!!
but i'm still so confused what about his friend that told me she likes him!!
then the second day he sent me another msg sounding so normal!!
what do you think did he get the message, i mean did he understand what i was trying to tell him??
(omg that was so long !!)

Lol listen i think it would be better if we talk in the discussion form...cuz this way we're gonna get the comments' golden award in two days ;-)
check discussion/ love and romance

Aw... i love this poem. It's amazing

Wow now that was a powerful poem
i loved this stanza
"I want you to love me,
I want you to care,
I want you to hold me,
I want you to be there,"

beautifully done

I love this poem... its so amazing... you're such a great writter

Hey
i know this too well
...wen u write a poem that doesnt rhyme totally...n sum stanzas are a lil longer or shorter than the others..
such a poem comes straight from the heart and u dont bluddy care if it sounds good or not cos u wanna let it all out....
but you end up writing a masterpice :)
THIS IS THAT MASTERPIECE!!!

xoxo dhaval...read some uv mine too and comment...plzz...no ones even lookin at me poems :(

Beautifully written! So much pain and emotion! 5/5

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN !!!!

Hey there's something so weird !! i can't find our topic anywhere on the site !!!!

Aww.. so sad.. i can relate in many ways.. there's this guy.. n i know hez special.. i know i love him.. ive always wanted to tell him, but never found a way.. i wz afraid.. that he might not b my fren anymore (past experiences) n i wz afraid hed not love meeh bak (obvious) n Other people told him, which was horrible.. n now.. everythingz mess dup.. well sry to tell u part of my life story (lol) well.. good poem.. 5/5